In A Dome World.

The president's coming to town today.

Today is Thursday. So its in the dome world. To see schedule go to July in archives and click on like grandpa like grandaughter. To see it.

This one is about a county in a dome ring (my ring) world to get started here is a story about some of the county every thurs is a new story about someone in the countys day ,week,adventure.


The story of the lost key of dome landBy Breanna Linna
Introductoin
Once apon a time there was a great place and there was no vilance or meaness everyone was good and kind even the bees,You could only get there through your key.But there was a catch that the keys would only work if the great key was in it's spot.Chapter oneBut there was one person who was not nice he lived far far at the border in the back of kindland everyday thinking of a planto make the great key be gone. He was a person who loved to do magic (Bad Magic) his name was Nartile. He has a peta dog named girna. Who was nice and never aproved of what he does . Even though he says he'll get rid of her they all knowthat deep down he loves her and that is why he dosen't give her away. He use to be a great ,funny ,nice kid till hismother left him and his father had to go away on a buisness trip and he never saw him again then he ran away and became mean.So no one dare to bother him except his niece nicole who visits every so often . But then he dosen't act mean around her never in his lifehas he done that and so she think he is nice. They don't know why this happens though. Some think she has magic powers and dosen't know it .most say it's because he has a soft side towrds her and never wants her to fear him as most others do and that he likes some company.Chapter twoLets cut to the chace huh. Well one rainy morning Nartile desided to make his move. Mostly because no one will be out on a rainy day.He goes to the great mountain where the great key has its spot. When he got to the key he says"hocas pocas un lock the big door let the great key be gone." Now look at those words carefully they might come in handy in finding the great key. The key disapeared from sight and everyone in the land was stuck in the land everyone out was left out of the land. This was really bad cause some had no houses here,some people have workin kindland and can't get to work no pay no food.Some bosses don't care if you can't get there for a bad reason they would fire them anyway.Most people thought this got out of hand. There where farm's with no care takers no things where running as much as before.The town has gone crazy even the mayor."WHO WHO WILL HELP US WE NEED TO FIND THE BAD GUY."saidMrs.Nellsoine the mayors wife. Almost as admedatly as it started people all overthe main town Still Spingshad gone crazy.A day or two later every town begain to sudgest who it might be. Miss.Qwintoin blamed the calf on Mr.Billy joes farm.She never likedthat baby cow and always thought it was up to trouble.They blamed each other even family members.Chapter threeWell just as that was ging on nicole was headed off to her uncles place with her newest best friend'sNia&Via their twins.They got the okay to come to his house.When they got there he treated them just like nicole even when she wasen't around.She said "Now I can't go back to mommy "she wailed at night when she heardabout the key missing an this made Nartile feel very guilty for doing that to her and her friends.Day after Day he'd watch them play with his dog which made themhappy. But after she tslked to her mom at night she would cry from bed time at 7:30 till9:00 at night.Soon three weeks after takeing this in he had Nia and Via go pick forest berrys.Then he sat nicole down amd said."Nicole i'm sorry I am the one who used magic to make the great key disapper please forgive me."Nicole was stuned to death hergreat uncle made the great key dissapear and cause the whole town lots of trouble."but uncle"she said"why in the world would you do that.""Because,he said, I'm not to nice to these people."Now this is the only person he would tell of course."I,He continude,"am very sorry I would put the key back if I only knew where to find it."Niccole was amazedshe didn't know what to say except "I'll get back to you"While he was waiting for her to speak he called everyone in the land and told him why he was mad,no longer mad anymoreand he took it he ask for forgiveness That was a shock to everyone they didn't expect him to even bother with anything like that and that he would admit it and ask for forgiveness.Now Even though it is kind land this was above meaness.Some where nice and forgave glad to turn him nice again some where not willing to forget him byt the mayor did so he became a citesen.Chapter FourLater that night nicole forgave him and her and her friends plus nartile and girna went to work.They thought and thought untill Nicole thought of something.She said"you used a spell right""Yes",uncleNartile said."what did you say in the spell?",wondered Nicole. He answerd back,"hocas pocas un lock the big door let the great key be gone.""Wait!"Said nicole," The big Door Un-Lock the big door!" "Yah" Everyone said. "But where is the big door"ask Via. "at the other side of great moutain let's go if we want to be back in time for bed."Said Uncle Nartile. "lets go!"Shouted Nia and Via.So they marched and marched and marched and marched and marched for three more hours I think you get the point.The finnaly got to town everyone drop what theywhere doing and stared in unisen they said "we're going to get the Great key" As they marched they got more people to help by chanting"We can not do this with out you come help us get the key the key come and join us to go on a hunt for the key."Over and over again. Sone they got to the top of the moutain.When The got there the was a few old men and women in old buisness clothes saying our ship sunk we've been down here for years.Thats when Nartile got teary eyed his dad +mom where standing right there and he huged them so hard they couldn't breath. After telling them everythinigthe got the great key after a lot of struggle back in its spot everyone could use their keys know.Why didn't they put it back with magic I don't know .The live happily ever after.